I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
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I didn’t know people called Fraser-Pryce the Pocket Rocket. What a cool nickname. Do you have a cool nickname people call you by?
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Kia Ora Ramari.
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done an amazing job on your profile page about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce. Your combination of text, images, and colours make for an interesting read. You definitely entice your readers.
I didn’t know people called Fraser-Pryce the Pocket Rocket. What a cool nickname. Do you have a cool nickname people call you by?
Perhaps you could include a reference to where you collected this information.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon