I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
A long walk to water - section 1
1. He was from the Dinka tribe and he
was only 10 when he went to school, in 1985.
2. No, it is nothing like my own.
1. - Where is my family,
- Where am i going and
- When will i see them again.
2. I would be scared, I would miss my family
and I wouldn't survive on my own.
1. She wakes up really early and gets sent on a 8 hour
walk to fetch water for her family.
2. I would get to tired and i might drop the water.
1. Because in the Dinka Tribe everyone has a V on there forehead
2. Because, i know who is who.
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
A long walk to water - Section 2
1. Because the group thinks Salva will just slow them down
2. It makes me feel really sad for Salva, because it would just be sad
that a group of men would just leave a 11 year old boy with nobody
to look after him.
1. My Parents
1. Describe Three:
1. Hunting for food
2. Digging for water
3. Have to be aware of the lions & The Rebels
2. Yes i do think Salva is doing a good job
3. Because for an 11 yr old boy, he's doing a really good job
on surviving and keeping up with his group.
She still has to get water.
Friday, 26 July 2019
The Accident
I was only 6 when it all happened.
So let me start off my life's story. As most people's life was, or is, mine was ordinary. I had lovely parents,
i had a cute dog and a big brother, they were the best family a little sister could ever ask for. But you see I
mostly used the word HAD so all of this, i use to have.
i had a cute dog and a big brother, they were the best family a little sister could ever ask for. But you see I
mostly used the word HAD so all of this, i use to have.
A few days before my 6th birthday my mum told me, “On your birthday, me, your dad,
your brother, charlie, and you will be going to a very special place.'' (charlie is the dog) So when my
birthday came up I was so excited for the special place my mum was talking about, I wore a white dress
and had the doll my mum and dad gave me. When we were ready to go I hop in my seat and my brother
was beside me. My brother was only 7 years older than me, he would always be by my side when my
parents weren't around. He was an overprotective brother, yes, but he was my brother and he was the best.
When we got to the special place, i was speechless, it was like paradise. There were beautiful green trees,
there were flowers everywhere. There was also a little mini work space for my dad. My dad was like
a scientist, well i didn’t know what he was (he was a HUMAN), he just mixed scientist thingy together.
He didn’t want to miss my birthday so he got people to put a little, mini, science ... house next to where
we were sitting ;-; .
your brother, charlie, and you will be going to a very special place.'' (charlie is the dog) So when my
birthday came up I was so excited for the special place my mum was talking about, I wore a white dress
and had the doll my mum and dad gave me. When we were ready to go I hop in my seat and my brother
was beside me. My brother was only 7 years older than me, he would always be by my side when my
parents weren't around. He was an overprotective brother, yes, but he was my brother and he was the best.
When we got to the special place, i was speechless, it was like paradise. There were beautiful green trees,
there were flowers everywhere. There was also a little mini work space for my dad. My dad was like
a scientist, well i didn’t know what he was (he was a HUMAN), he just mixed scientist thingy together.
He didn’t want to miss my birthday so he got people to put a little, mini, science ... house next to where
we were sitting ;-; .
I was having a great time, eating, playing, climbing the tree and chasing my dog but my dad was
in that house thing again. I wanted to ask him something, so I knocked on the door and he didn’t reply,
then I went in. So when I went in I saw a lot of science things but i couldn’t see my dad. I got bored
waiting for him so I was nosy and grabbed one of the cups that had purple liquid in it. When I was
looking at it i heard a banging noise like something dropped on the floor. I jumped with fright and the
purple liquid tipped on me, some of it got in my mouth but I didn’t notice until I tasted it. When I finally
tasted it I was trying to spit it out but it already went down my throat. I never knew what it would do to
me so I didn’t think it would matter. A few minutes later the purple liquid that was on me, was gone.
I didn’t clean it off me, or anything, it was like my skin soaked it up, or something.
in that house thing again. I wanted to ask him something, so I knocked on the door and he didn’t reply,
then I went in. So when I went in I saw a lot of science things but i couldn’t see my dad. I got bored
waiting for him so I was nosy and grabbed one of the cups that had purple liquid in it. When I was
looking at it i heard a banging noise like something dropped on the floor. I jumped with fright and the
purple liquid tipped on me, some of it got in my mouth but I didn’t notice until I tasted it. When I finally
tasted it I was trying to spit it out but it already went down my throat. I never knew what it would do to
me so I didn’t think it would matter. A few minutes later the purple liquid that was on me, was gone.
I didn’t clean it off me, or anything, it was like my skin soaked it up, or something.
While I was looking at my clothes amazed and shocked, my dad walked in the room with boxes in his
hands, covering his face. When I saw him walking through, I quickly hid behind one of the benches.
When he put down the boxes he found the bottle, empty, with some of the purple liquid on the ground.
hands, covering his face. When I saw him walking through, I quickly hid behind one of the benches.
When he put down the boxes he found the bottle, empty, with some of the purple liquid on the ground.
He picked up the bottle, putting his hand on his head, and said “How is it gone?
How did it get on the floor?”. He seemed worried for a second. When he exited the room
How did it get on the floor?”. He seemed worried for a second. When he exited the room
I am not yet finished.
I’ll try to finish it later.
But I did get to finish some of it.
Friday, 5 July 2019
My Unfinished Animation
Here is my unfinished animation
i will be finishing it on the holidays
or when i get back to school please enjoy.
i will be finishing it on the holidays
or when i get back to school please enjoy.
My Final Narrative
This right here is my final narrative
i hope you enjoy it. (cause i did >-<).
Ramari
The end of Donald Trump
Everyone apparently loves Donald Trump, but that's what he thinks. He's a TERRIBLE person but he doesn’t know that.
This is why people don’t like him:
1. Because he's a terrible man
2. Because he is trying to build a wall between
Mexico and America
3. And because he’s orange
So one day Donald Trump FINALLY figured out that not many people liked him, so he invited three random people who didn’t like him so he could show them he’s not a bad person. The people were a teacher, a child that got taken from school and a famous basketball player.
Donald Trump took them on a plane ride, once they were in the air, there was silence in the plane. 10,000 feet in the air somehow the plane started to go down, like there was something wrong with the engine (The captain didn’t like his job and he was old soooo he knew this was going to happen).
There were only 3 parachutes and the kids school bag. Donald Trump took a parachute and said “I am the most lovable and wise president, and my people need me” he jumped out of the plane and then the famous basketball player grabbed a parachute and said “I am a famous basketball player and my fans would be devastated if I died ” and then he jumped out of the plane.
There was just one more parachute left. The teacher grabbed the parachute and gave it to the child and said “ I have lived a long and happy life and you have years to live”. The child pushed the parachute away from him and grabbed his school bag and said “It’s fine you will live and so will i” the teacher was confused, and the child went on and said “ Donald Trump took my school bag instead of the parachute”
When they go to the ground Donald Trump looked like a mashed potato but red and worst.
The End
(What a happy ending, don’t you think)
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