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Friday, 16 August 2019

Zoos are dangerous!

I think Zoos are dangerous. I think Zoos are dangerous because the
animals can try and attack you. For example, when I went to the zoo
I went to see the baboons, a zookeeper told me not to show my teeth
at them, so I showed me teeth at them, and the baboon tried to attack
me. But the best part, is that I survived.
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1 comment:

  1. Megan NL18 August 2019 at 20:26

    Ramari, you have identified one clear reason and given an example of why you think zoos are dangerous. To extend yourself, try and come up with at least three reasons and write a paragraph for each reason. I have seen Baboons go a bit crazy also when someone is staring at them. They can definitely be a bit scary!

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